The pluck sounds very over compressed; so does every other instrument too. The drums are drowned out by the very jarring leads and lack of volume. Try to use ducking when the kick or snare hits to allow them to cut through. The second drop at around 2 minutes demonstrates a good mix for the first half. The second half of the second drop was being dominated by the leads again and drowned the other sounds out.
TL:DR; Your mixing and mastering could use some work. Lighten up on the compression.
All of those things aside, this track could have been decent.
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